Animatic-New and Improved

Above is the new and improved animatic, based on critical feedback from others. 

I improved upon:

• Quality of the voice overs, sound, tone and background noise.

The initial first two shots, including my production titles shown in the previous blog post.

Overall, I think the outcome of my new animatic was good and generally much better than the previous animatic I posted. I had a little trouble with the timing of the music and initially the voice overs didn't turn out as loud as I would have liked, but I overcame this and finally got there.